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Disclaimer: I don't condone the Reader's actions in this story. I did, however, want to make her somewhat sympathetic, at least in the beginning, because writing a character who gradually dissolves into obsession is inherently more interesting than an already-crazy one. I wanted to play a Yandere/Stalker/what-have-you Reader seriously, so she's not SUPPOSED to be the good guy, here. Also, I picked Francis NOT because he gets around, but because I feel like Francis very rarely is put into a position where he's vulnerable in fanfiction/fanart, which is annoying because it makes him quite one-dimensional, so I wanted to explore this a little. (Hence the preview image. It's not EXACTLY what I had in mind, but do you have any idea how hard it is to find a picture of Scared!France that isn't played for comedy? VERY. If anybody knows of a place I might find a decent picture of France looking terrified, do let me know.) The story has an ambiguous ending, I know, because A) I didn't want to kill off Reader, because it's predictable and B) It was getting long enough as is. I might do a sequel if people enjoyed this one.

Also, I'm pretty indifferent to Hungary, but I felt like she worked better in the story as your friend rather than your friend just being a random nobody like she was originally. XD All that said, I hope you like this, I've been sitting on this story for a few weeks now and I reallyreallyreally hope it doesn't suck.

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Oh my god I absolutely loved this. The way it slowly twisted out into the ending. Especially how you write Francis' perspective on his own actions. (France is rarely a character written well). I'm so impressed. I can't wait to read everything else you've written. I think this was a great introduction to your writing.